Saturday, April 3, 2010

A $h0rt story 1 wr()te...

Hi again ;)



So I like reading books, no I love it!! The different world, the adventures - everything you wanna be but can't.



Now i've actually written a book and want to get it published - the problem is that I dunno how and who to contact also I dunno how people would respond to it. Can you maybe take the time to just read the prolouge and comment and what you think of it?????



Book Title: Undefined



Prologue:



   Barefoot, a girl carefully walked down the steps and stood in the middle of an unnervingly quiet room, shivering.
   Something had brought her here and she was determined to find out who or what.
She searched her surroundings only to be disappointed - then came the pain, pain that burned like fire rushing through her veins. Tears filled her eyes but she was determined not to cry. But still fear grew inside of her, threatening to take control of all her senses.

   Breathing heavily, she tried to scream but no sound came out from her dry lips.  The tattoo on the left side of her neck turned vivid black instantly and burnt even deeper into her already pale skin. Small droplets of blood trickled down her back, soaking her white gown.
   Suddenly the fear overwhelmed her and she tried to run. Anywhere, she didn’t care.
As long as it’s away from here.
  She turned, desperately looking for a way out.
   The girl slipped and sprawled across the floor. Not giving up she began to rise but was too weak. Bracing herself, she gave in and sank down to the cold floor.
   The last thing she saw through her watery eyes was a woman who looked like she was made out of mist.
An angel.
   The woman was beckoning to her speaking wordlessly but the girl was already too deep and couldn’t make her way out to her.
   The last of her strength left her and the girl collapsed lost in her own, unbearable sanity.



Thanx :D

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